Lets try another word game shall we?
In November, now older, vibrant elms molt bare. Evergreens rust now openly while oaks leave debris everywhere. Roses, vivid in bright red are now tenderly evicting leaves. Mere shadows, my own little trees bring a rare elation.
This one is a little feminine, but this word game is similar to the last one.
pay particular attention to letter placement, not so much to the prose itself.
If you think you have it please e-mail me